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PostSubject: Shiro shikon   Tue Dec 13, 2011 7:49 pm

Name: Shiro Shikon

Alias: Nickname

Birthday/ Age: September 29 x500/ 25

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Striaght

Appearance
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Height: 6ft,3 inches

Weight: 180

Personality: Shiro is someone who believes in the order and its way’s he is a very happy person who loves to drink as well but don’t ever get on his bad side, he loves women and is sometimes perverted, when he is working however he is a completely different person.

Likes: women, holy order, sun, warm places.

Dislikes and Fears: Shiro dislike’s anyone who is against the order, and fears his grandfather

Abilities: shiro has brute strength, excellent mental capabilities, he also has his speed, and finally he has the ability to sense magic and the signatures of each magic.

Strenghts: all of his abilities.

Weaknesses: ice, metal, stone.

Guild

Name: Holy Order

Tattoo: on his left arm

Magic
Air Dragon Slayer.

Magic Type: Air manipulation.


Spell Name: Air dragons Roar

Spell Effect: This is self explanatory its like any other dragon slayer roar


Spell Name: Secret dragon art Air dragons blades

Spell Effect: this attack makes very strong wind with the air forming thousands of blades that cover the area that attacks everything destroying everything around him.


Spell Name: Air dragons iron fist

Spell Effect: when this happens the air around his fist start to move around and compress plus making small blades around his fist.


Spell Name: Hidden dragon art air dragons point zero

Spell Effect: This ability allows the user to make it so there is no air in a curtain spot or area.


Spell Name: Air dragons shield

Spell Effect: This is not a attack but a defense and with this defense the user can turn into air becoming invisible however when this is in effect the user cannot attack.


Spell Name: Air dragons compress

Spell Effect: This attack compresses the air in a curtain spot of what he chooses


Spell Name: Dragon force

Spell Effect: this is the most powerful form of any dragon slayer, and its self explaintory

Magic Seal:
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Strengths: shrio has spent his life making his magic stronger and he can stop a lot of magic’s with his air magic.

Weaknesses: ice, metal, anything not made with air in mind.

Weapon Name: hard hair

Magical Properties: his hair can rapidly grow to ten feet and cover a curtain spot as well at his hair is unbreakable it has no offence just defense, it can also move in any way at shiro’s will, also it can only block in two directions.

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Note: im sorry this is the best picture i could find

Weapons History:when shiro was young his father had the same thing with his hair and taught it to shiro.

Background
Shiro was born into a royal family that worked with the holy order and assisted them in many different ways, Shiro from a young age started to learn magic and how to fight. Shiro’s parents were killed when he was eight by rebels so after that happened shiro managed to escape and was found by a dragon this dragon started to train him in his magic, once he turned 15 his magic was complete. He then joined the holy order when he turned 15 and has been proceeding through the ranks because he believes in the holy orders ideas.


Note: I request to be either Master General or Master Lieutenant


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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 1:57 pm

Your Male has a Female POicture Lol And You say nothign about yourt spirit Magic,
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 1:59 pm

believe it or not that's a male character and i took it out because it would make my character over powered
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:40 pm

Alright this one is a little more well done then raizo weirdly. I mean it is a little quicker but to the point, but we have also come to the these are some high end spells right which could make you seem over powered unless your willing to cope with the magic being used up as you use these spells, this should not be an issue of course since you are a pretty good roleplay most the time right. Don't get cuaght in the heat of the fight is pretty much what I am saying, it is okay to lose.

You took out spirit magic which is fine but I would have let you have it with a few changed aspects to it so if your interested in what I have to say about that then just ask I'll tell you, if you agree then you can re add spirit magic if not then just don't have the spirit magic.

The hard hair thing you say it is only a defensive thing that can't break but he can move it at his own will meaning that you could infact make a spear with it, and the rapid growth would not help your defense, it seems really over powering to me. so I am worried about allowing that.

And the Master General and Master Leitanant thing won't be possible, I and my fellow Admins already agreed upon what may happen with those two spots. But you can have the head of the round table summit.

So sadly I will have to postpone your approval until I can meet with the other admins about the hair thing really, because I don't want to be a dick and say you can't have it but I don't want you to be over powered so I will confrence with them and we can all discuss it sound fair?
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:44 pm

alright and really I would never use it as a spear its only to protect himself
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:48 pm

yes and I fully trust that I just feel a little discussion is still needed because if it doesn't break that almost makes it like a perfet defense unless, you could add in the hair can only block up to two directions at a time leaving a few more openings right, because if you made a dome around yourself with your hair no one could get you, but if you made it so openins had to be made. or possibly that the wider range of an attack you block the more gaps there are in where the hair is, you know because it won't all be braided nice in tight in a wall right? those are your options I guess add one of those let me know and I'll read and approve it if it is right fair?
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:58 pm

oh yea its all good and its can only stretch ten feet out i should put that in there but that's it he cannot make a dome with it
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:05 pm

well make the few updates I guess owe and for the spirit absorption again also make sure that it is put in there that it is not actually their soul your taking since that is a bit harsh but it is actually all their magic it just looks like their soul.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:10 pm

nah its fine i dont want my character over powered il leave the spirit void thing out right now and il make my character work for it
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:15 pm

ok i think i got it all and also i would prefer this character be higher up in the holy order ranks because of his skills but its up to you
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:56 pm

I still don't see where the thing about his hair was updated, it should be under magical properties right?
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:58 pm

ok how about now
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 9:07 pm

Alright it's approved, though like I said there is no open spot higher up yet though I think I can talk Toxic into chaning that so there is an opening not quite as high as you'd want but still better than what you would have.
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro shikon   Wed Dec 14, 2011 9:12 pm

hey anything better is cool with me
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